Bennett's first fiction. He got a penguin stuff animal from school and named it "Fuzzy Head". Here is the story about Fuzzy Head.
His draft and comments from Mrs. C. The story is quite funny!
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- 12月 21 週日 200822:33
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Bennett's first fiction. He got a penguin stuff animal from school and named it "Fuzzy Head". Here is the story about Fuzzy Head.
His draft and comments from Mrs. C. The story is quite funny!
這位小朋友真的好棒, 雖不是很清楚 但是隱約看的出是一個很有趣的story. 他的插畫好可愛. 從他的故事裡, 我猜留是個很愛朋友很有愛心的人. 我想他有編故事的能力, 應該和他的豐富的生活體驗 和大量閱讀的習慣有關; 我深覺的孩子教育真是一支草, 一點露, 包含對人有愛心的那個部份.
每天他睡著以後,我就深深的覺得他是個可愛的天使.最近常常有讓人搖頭的時刻,我只好忍耐再忍耐,冷靜又冷靜...