今晚書包裡躺著這張小紙.讓一年級的小朋友練習使用形容詞 (adjective) 來形容名詞 (noun).
下面是留留的小作文.他拿到的圖是行駛於田野上冒煙的火車.
他寫著...
"The smoke looks like the body, tail and feet of a racoon. The train is long but skiny. It looks like a beautiful day. The grass appears to be withering. There are about one hundred cargos. The engine is solid black. But the cargo boxes are very colorful. The tracks are shaped like an S. This train seems to make a lot of pollution. There seems to be a pit."
看到 The train seems to make a lot of pollution 忍不住笑出來!觀察的十分精準呀!
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我喜歡第一句,雖然我覺得浣熊沒有這麼黑啦,哈哈~
想像力至上咩!
我也是看見The train seems….這句忍不住笑了出來, 拉下去繼續看,發現媽媽也笑了出來。 看來,小留留也是偏理性的孩子呢。
對呀.他的文章常常都是 facts. 讀書感想也變成分析文.我也沒辦法哩!